OO...pretty. School is hateful. ^^ grat poem

stupid school...

Lovely poem!
I love your work.

Loved the beginning and the imagery, but the end was a bit of an anticlimax, and not quite in the same style as the rest.

Interesting to say the least. I enjoyed this, although the end came blatently. it could use elaboration. For example;

The reverberating echo of a bell hangs in the air.
It reaches me, it reaches my soul. a mental kick in the **, as I have to go to school.

This is not at all my writing style, as you would see my true talents in 'Burn', in my collection.
Give me a review, and post your email. I would like to work with you, and let your visions blossom to words. Your mind must be set free, ignore restraint, and most of all. ignore pressure from society. Write of sex, drugs, alcohol, abuse, dreams, visions, and thoughts. All of these compile to the effect of a true writer.