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X-Romantic-X
2007-12-21
ch 1,
abuseI'm sure many MANY people have asked you this but did it really happen to you? It is truly an amazing story.
BabyGenki
2006-12-20
ch 43,
abuseI loved this story, it maybe me smile at times and come close to tears other times, I wish I could write this well. I hate the ending though, not because it was bad, but because it is what happens in real life. Who knows, maybe you would consider writing a story quite like this, a minor and an adult fall in love... but maybe with the fairy tale ending that we all dream about.
Lexi Elizabeth Walker
2006-07-21
ch 43,
abusethat's really really sweet. i'm assuming that this happened to you, because of the last chapter, and the last two words of the closing credits. i think teacher/student relationships can happen, but i'm not nessassarily for it. i'd explain in detail, but i've been on the computer long enoguh and i have to go.
jor
2006-05-16
ch 43, anon.
abuseso the carecters are real but the story isn't im so cunfused
jor
2006-05-16
ch 41, anon.
abuseoh god this is so sad i want to kill aurora
jor
2006-05-15
ch 27, anon.
abusei love it so much please never stop writing
jor
2006-05-15
ch 20, anon.
abusei love it so much im so happy
notcoolenuff2bme
2006-05-01
ch 42,
abuseI LOVE this story! you are an excellent writer, keep it up. Can't wait to read the sequel! In fact, I have it opened right now =)
L
2006-03-26
ch 43, anon.
abuseTruly a wonderful, heart-wrenching story.

Though, I'm curious.

Is this story autobiographical?

Was it you?
yve galang
2006-01-15
ch 43, anon.
abusethis was the best story i've read in a long while..i would like to ask, this might be personal but..did this really happen to you?! i'll leave my e-mail add. and wait for your reply..please do..cause i maybe am actually in the same situation as this story..thank you.
deadlyanger
2005-09-20
ch 43,
abuseWOW the ending (although sad) was amazing. All that they lived everything they went throught!! It is the best stories i have read in fiction press. Your writin style is excellent and unique. I look foward to reading the rest of ur pieces of writin!
Rinova
2005-09-11
ch 1,
abusei love this fic. i started reading it again. lol
elene
2005-04-28
ch 43, anon.
abusethis was a very well written story. was on the verge of tears. but it is very realistic. teacher/student relationships don't last. i liked the ending. left a lot to think about. the many what-ifs with a reassurance that they may still end up together in the near future. but i guess it's the unpredictable-ness (for lack of better terms) that makes it really good.
Yume Hikari
2005-04-19
ch 22,
abusei love this! its so sweet! i love forbidden romance stories so this is like a dream come true!
BlueAki
2005-04-17
ch 43,
abusei truley and deeply enjoyed this story. in a sense, i know how serena must feel and it's true, love is blind and it hurts alot. this was really great and i'll be sure to read more of your wonderful stories.
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