 Chaotic Child 2004-04-29 . chapter 8Cool! Please update soon! |
 liana 2004-04-11 . chapter 8 Great story! |
 You Need More Flair 2003-11-29 . chapter 7Esto es maravilloso!
Please write more very soon. |
 IdealFacade 2003-11-10 . chapter 1*is wondering how chapter one is chapter three* Wonderful story, I like the concept you have going on here. And Adam sounds like a attractive guy, are we going to get more of his point of view? Probably. I need to read the rest of the chapters.* dashes off to the next chappie* |
 Kimberly06 2003-04-26 . chapter 1good start |
 Xtreme Nuisance 2003-04-26 . chapter 5WOO! MORE PLZ! : P |
 You Need More Flair 2003-04-25 . chapter 5Whoa. That was kinda harsh. "Do you love me?" What kinda crap is that. If a guy says that, does he really expect a truthful answer? Adam is dumb. |
 moi 2003-04-22 . chapter 4 please update...i'm dying to know more...PLEASE |
 i luv french 2003-04-20 . chapter 4 please update... i've been hanging around ur story waitin for a new chapter for days...PLEASE...collapses on the floor |
 moi 2003-04-20 . chapter 4 its gettin more n more cool, pweeze update |
 Xtreme Nuisance 2003-04-12 . chapter 4YAY! MORE PLZ! WHOO! YAY! WHAT HAPPENED BETWEEN THEM IN FOURTH GRADE ANYWAY?! o well! :P more plz! |
 Xtreme Nuisance 2003-04-12 . chapter 3GTG TO THE NEXT CHAPPIE! I LEAVE IN ABOUT AN HOUR! GOTTA READ, GOTTA READ, GOTTA READ! O.o |
 Xtreme Nuisance 2003-04-12 . chapter 2LOOK! I'M BACK! I MADE UR DAY! AND OFF TO CHAPTER 3 WE GO! O.o |
 Kala 2003-03-28 . chapter 3 'Tis pretty interesting. |
 The Author 2003-03-10 . chapter 1 Hola, everyone ^^ Thanks a LOT for your reviews. They mean a lot to me (Yes, I know, I'm being sappy). To answer your criticism, Nirupa is actually an Asian Indian girl's name. It's not Native American. Also, some of the boys' names (i.e. Ceric) are completely made-up. If they sound American to you *shrugs* that's fine with me. The same goes for the girls' names. Some are in fact American names, and some are not; they're completely made-up. And to Katie Bug: I'm sorry if it seems like that to you, but it's not. But thanks for your review, all the same :D |