wow! o_o!! this chapter is so cool! o.o!! wow O_o!

Sir Doran definatley has the "I want to help people" kind of personality o_o very serious on his words, o_o ooh, I see a mysterious guy with a mysterious past o_o... perhaps he's all heroic because of what happened to him once XD; but I'm bad at guessing personalities oo;;

COOLIES!! This is just like a RPG game! yet I'm not playing it, I'm reading it! O_O!! I love rpg games ^_^!! Like a video game o.o! COOL!! ^_^!!


Please please continue!

I must say Sir Doran really really confuses me o.o;;, he seems to take things literally... And so distant. uh... that's just meh o_o;;

again, please continue!!

I reall like your story, i only have one question and it really dosn't have anything to do with the story
how do you make that cool looking sighn thats in the title of every chapter?
well thats all
thanx
Later Dayz

!:standing ovation:!

Another stupendous, spectacular, miraculous, insert-flattering-adjective chapter! At the very beginning I thought she had ended up back home, or awakened from her "dream" or something. But then, thankfully, she turned out to be still in "dreamland"... Whew, you had me going there for a minute...

Carrying on...

I really like the idea of both Lady Enda and Sir Doran not believing Diangela at first. Also, I definitely appreciate the fact that Diangela is not a 'Mary-Sue'. ::shivers::

In case you didn't know, a Mary-Sue is a main character who is: beautiful, amazingly intelligent, charming, strong, witty, stunning, and completely perfect in every way.
Now, from what I can see (read..?), Diangela is weak, whiny, sarcastic, rude, disbelieving and... confused.

...

... I like her already! ^_^

About Sir Doran: He irritates me. But in a good, must-read-to-find-out-if-he-gets-any-better kinda way, mind you. I like his disbelieving nature above all else so far, and, for a knight-in-shining-armor kinda guy, he's as realistic as they come. Good job!

::sighs:: Did I just type 'good job'? Geez, how lame is that? >

ooh! Update soon!

Oh. OH!

'I fell on the floor and I woke up, but not in MY bed…'


ACK! You and your cliffhangers! How could you just leave it there! EVIL AUTHOR! So, what I want to know is, just whose bed is she in??! *grins slyly* Come on Tsurai, you can tell me. No need to keep any secrets.

BTW, by chance, is Diangela's arrogant betrothed going to be making an appearance in her dream world by chance? Now wouldn't that be interesting.

Either way, this chapter was so great! I love fantasy and I love sarcasm, so this fits me fine. I especially liked:

" :Crack:

What was that? I was panicking now. Don't tell me the branch was cracking. That was a LONG way down! Oh, bloody hell! "

^__^ Good stuff, ne?

I'm really surprised, however, that you don't have more reviews. Tsk tsk, these people just don't know what their missing. ^_^ Please update soon!! And when I say please, I mean Or Else.

~^__^~ Ja!

Well, I know that I should probably wait until I've actually read the "story part" but I just read over your **Character and Story Reference** and I'm just so happy to find someone else who plans it out like this like I do! Before I write a story, I plan it out almost exactly like this.

*glances at how many fics she has posted*

Hm, maybe that's why I'm still a reviewer.

Anyway, it looks interesting so far and I'm glad you put this up, it gives you an idea of how the characters are going to act. I'm also glad to see that the main character has flaws. I hate it when authors portray the perfect herione or hero. gr.

Yup, so here I go.

this is such an interesting story! keke, Dia seems real enough for me. at least for me though. ^^

Sir Doran seems okay. so far atleast, is he the bad guy of the story?. maybe not

I'm satisfied with this chapter, please continue!

this is the most wonderful, cool, and oreyo like (don't mind me. I don't even know what Oreyo means XD) story there is! please please PLEASE continue! this story is so interesting! ^_^! more like. an. um. fantasy world! O_O! XD!! please continue! ^_^!