I'm glad this is going to be a long story- it's great! Like the detail you out into your story. Update soon please!

Pretty cool.

Some of the characters seem to get lost in your diaglouge, but that is something REALLY hard to control. (pleaswe note; I go around criticizing the dialouge of real, published books, so don't feal bad. I'm REALLY critical.)

The little band of freinds reminds me so much of our group of friends. Teo differences, We're in middle school, and in our group, there is one non-dinger/musically talente dperson...me!

Ahem, enough of me babbling. Please update.

Jeeze, that was a really long review.
Now you have to update because of all the HARD work I put into it *nudge nugde, wink, wink*

It's really interesting. Keep on writing.

oh my god that was great write more soon ok? whats going on with john will jessica go out with him but then what about steve? write more asap

pretty cute.could ya descibe jessica??update soon!

Hee hee. :D

WRITE MORE

This is great so far!!More pleez?!