 Showstopper 2003-03-17 . chapter 4Since I'm lazy I'm going to mention stuff from Ch. 3 as well. I liked both chapters, especially Fiddler's conversation with Elka in Ch. 3 and the fights between the Guardians and the Crystal Bird and Mr. Meaner respectively. Moli is an interesting character. I'm not sure exactly if I want her to be good or not. Good work and looking forward to the next chapter, :) |
 Showstopper (too lazy to sign in) 2003-03-05 . chapter 1 Hey man. Finally got time to read this baby. Nice setup with this book. I like Mr. Radiator. He sounds pretty crazy like Pierre said. Teuila's thought process was cool as well. Keep up the good work. Umm, just to clarify something you said in an email. Nanami isn't in a cell, she's in a normal hospital room with a guard outside the door. You'd figure that it'd be easy for her to escape odds like that but she's still pretty weak from the battle. Anyways, have a good day. |