This flows really well. It was quick and everything I felt was quick and I understand the feelings very well.

I'm sorry, but I don't like this one. Nice try, though.

This is a nice poem. I liked the rhyming. Good work, and keep writing.

aww...so sad... but its a good poem.. keep up the good work

yea, i could see this happening. life sucks and then u die...

I liked it.. Seems like there was supposed to be a hidden meanin behind what u wrote.. sad.. but well written.. Good job.. Keep it up..

Oh, sad. Nicely done.

What we could've, would've, should've done is what's going to nag us for a long time to come. I started to feel guilty simply reading this knowing all the times all I could do was helplessly watch. The piece itself was very good..keep writing.

Aw... That's so sad... I could just see it, too... I'm sorry for that little boy. :(

Wonderful poem! You rhymed in a way that I haven't seen before, just here and there, in a pattern and yet not. I like!

nicly done. very dramatic and truthful to societies bullies today, shown through children and taunts. good work!

wow, sad and powerful, beautifully written as well, i enjoyed it muchly, nicely done

hm.nicely done.

omg! that's so sad! kids can be so cruel!