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| Kelpylion 2003-04-23 ch 1,   | Wow, even after going through an automatic translator, which I admits usually destroys poetry, this is an incredibly good haiku. I really wish I knew Chinese... |
| aurias 2003-03-15 ch 1, | Don't worry about the sounding funny part, I'm sure it's alright. I do feel my names for poems are sometimes funny too. :) Nice poem. |
| not sure yet 2003-03-04 ch 1, | beyond my skill at the moment.not the best at it and me sleepy, maybe ill come back later and give it a shot, but im sure its good anywayz.pointless review, but thought i would just say somthing |
| Pear 2003-03-04 ch 1, | Nice! You always have impressive vocabulary! Creating title is hard, but it's very pivotal. It's the window to the composition. I like this one a lot. You seem to be well educated in ancient Chinese poems. Not many people have the ability to write them anymore. When I read your peoms, I feel that you have experienced much, like a matured adult. (Just a side thought, I always do that because I love to practice my deduction skill.) |