Way to hit the nail on the head...

i get what you're saying in this..

to you, she was the girl in english class

to me, she is the artistic actress, the spotlight exemplifying her beauty as she slips from role to role

what can you do, you know

OMG! I must see more of this! It reminds me of me and my first crush (even though I am not gay, and don't have anything against gays). I always have dreams about him, especially when I first felt attracted to him. Very bittersweet and very real! AWESOME WRITE!

Very nice. I can relate to it.

Wow... if you don't keep writing this I'll die. This is just the most bittersweet thing I've even read! Please keep writing.

deep... very deep. loved it!

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful :)

This is beautiful, this is everything I wish I could think but am too frightened to admit. The detached way in which you word the thought processes of your heroine are so impressive. I congratulate you on your talent.

Oh, woah! I love this story/musing, it's a really good piece of literature(sp?).I have tons of emotional outlet pieces like this lying around, yours is really excellent. Keep up the great work!

-Mandy a.k.a Linwe Carnesir

reminds me so much about myself... great story :)

Damn, I know how that is. Very deep. Very well written.

Wow. Deep, but not cheesy at all. That's something very rare to come across these days.

Congrats. I'm impressed.

thats a really good story. its really sad but i can relate to most of the stuff you wrote about.

oh christ.

there's always. always that one girl, eh? the one you couldn't have. jesus.

the angst was magnificent. makes me want to read this again, with a cigarette the next time around. *smirk*

liked it. as usual. she's very lucky, and she doesn't know it.

Damn, Mick. In my head much? Geez, with the way you've been writing, some may thing you're a lil butch jiminy cricket perched on my shoulder ;) Great writing as always. . .you totally captured the essense of everything I think you wanted to say. You continue to amaze me.