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| Human Wasteland 2003-08-20 ch 1,  | abuseWow, this is powerful. I don't really like that she married only a year after Kirk died, but its wonderful anyway. ^^ Great work. |
| GaelicWizard 2003-07-09 ch 1, | abuseouch. painful. wow. interesting. This is one story i'll be pondering for a long time. I'm not sure if I love it or not, but i suppose its good that I can't decide. :-) Parts of it really make me uncomfortable, and I don't like that Laurie marries after Kirk dies. but most (almost all) of it is really good! I'll add more thoughts after i've had time to contemplate a little more... JP |
| L 2003-04-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseMAN! that ws HOT! i cant wait to read the rest! ~L |
| Chorus Frogs 2003-04-14 ch 2, | abuseOh, man. That was a good story. My eyes got teary. |
| Kattalyn 2003-04-11 ch 2, | abuse*Gasp* That was a wonderful story, beautifully written. I loved it. You are a very good writer. |
| Shan't say. 2003-04-11 ch 2, anon. | abuse*blinks slowly* ...That was...a really good story...I didn't really like the fact that you make Kirk die..*sigh*...But...it was a really good story...I think you should continue this story...you would make it a sequal ya know...that would be nice... |
| JuNeMaNgO 2003-03-14 ch 1, | abuseWow, another wonderful story by you! Please write more! |