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Reviews For: The Face in the Back
ChibiHeartDragon 2003-12-06 . chapter 1
I love this! ^.^
Amethyst Blood 2003-06-01 . chapter 1
that's coolish. I like it a lot, since I can relate, *cough*marching-band*cough* ahem, nasty colds coming around, eh?
keep on writing...
'Dice'
ForgottenMists 2003-06-01 . chapter 1
So very true. Some people are always ignored, no matter their talents. Like quiet people. They get ignored a lot, but quiet people are often the most imaginative or talented.
Brenron 2003-06-01 . chapter 1
I love this!
Air Bicyclers Anonymous 2003-05-27 . chapter 1
Everyone's definitely correct in saying tons of people can identify with your anthem. I know I can.

There were a couple mistakes in spelling, but you have a good rhythm. I got a little lost near the end, but I enjoyed reading this.

I think you've discovered the secret to theatre... "To act well your part, there all the honor lies," that is the motto of my Thespian troupe, and it is a good one to live by.

We don't need flowers or whatever, just a hearty applause from the crowd and to hear them say how much they enjoyed the show. :)
StregaLuna 2003-04-27 . chapter 1
wow .. i really liked this 1. it's very good.. u had a few spellin' mistakes, like u put east instead of easy nd u put week instead i think u meant seek, but it's very good.. i really like it.. nd i'm putting it in my book.. Luv ya Pez
~Beans
The Doubtless One 2003-03-06 . chapter 1
I like this one. It was definitely worth waiting to read. Reminds me of all the people that go unnoticed by the world. Well i guess that was the whole point, wasn't it?
Xy Hapu 2003-03-05 . chapter 1
Wow, I really like this. It's very . . . inspiring, I think, and defiant. A lot of people can relate to this, and there were some great lines. Lemme see . . . ah, this one I liked a lot "But I try my best and you don't need to, So to me, that is more worthy of praise" (so true), and the next line "And while you all go to celebrate another end, You neglect to remember the face in the back, Who cries for another beginning" which I found sad (in the good way), and the last lines about the rose and the smile foreshadowing many more was the perfect way to finish it off. All I have in the way of suggestions is some spelling stuff, like when you say 'east' I -think- you meant easy (there are 3 occurences of this that I could see, all in the first half). But that's about it. Great anthem, I feel this way too sometimes, and I think you captured the essence of it well by using a play as a backdrop. Yay :)
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