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| Lovely White 2003-07-31 ch 1,   | This was very sad and beautiful. I love this line: "I remember the brown hair that fell in your eyes and how you played with it more than I did with mine." I just like it. ^^ Keep up the good work. |
| Niklariana 2003-03-06 ch 1, | Well written, good job. I love the ending :) -Nika |