  rowland 2008-05-05 . chapter 7 this was an inspiring story of a girl who had courage. |
| Noman 2007-12-09 . chapter 1 What the * is wrong with you? Taking an innocent nursery rythme and turning it into something like this! |
  Sage Valkisco 2004-04-09 . chapter 7MAGNIFICO! I loved it! That is such a evil nursery rhyme I have never heard before untill now. You should make a series, making nursery rhymes into sinister stories |
 Flyyboy06 2004-04-05 . chapter 7That was great. Well-written, good plot, good character development...jus everything about that fic was great. h0lla |
 Kristen672 2003-04-26 . chapter 7This is a great story.. |
 Spiky Hair Kid 2003-04-01 . chapter 7Well, I can finally review it, so for the last chapter I must say it was quite the ending...I really liked the poem, the part which you wrote, at the end, overall it was fun to read and very interesting, nice short story. |
 Drucilla Black 2003-03-20 . chapter 7*Applauds wildly* this was one of THE freakiest and coolest horror stories I've EVER read! The ending poem was an especially nice touch... |
| Spiky Hair Kid 2003-03-14 . chapter 6 Wow, cool chapter, I can only imagine how it's gonna end now with Polly goin' all psycho and such. |
| Wyrd Sista187 2003-03-14 . chapter 6 OMG! Please please PLEASE update this ASAP it is just sososo wonderfully scary! |
| me 2003-03-12 . chapter 5 This story is good. ITs a little bit twisted but it is still good. |
| Spiky Hair Kid 2003-03-12 . chapter 5 Of course I like it, what else would I say? The last paragraph and especially the last sentence I really like. Kinda somber chapter, filled with so much emotion, it's good. |
| Spiky Hair Kid 2003-03-11 . chapter 4 Cool chapter, definitly liked the way you led the reader on to the sex thing and then wham common sense takes over and nothing happens. It's also nice the way you have Polly stand up for herself for once.The story seems all to real for the people that experince what Polly does, it's a shame that it happens in real life. |
| Drucilla Black 2003-03-10 . chapter 3 This does put quite an interesting twist on that innocent little nursery rhyme, and I really like it! Please continue soon! |
| Spiky Hair Kid 2003-03-08 . chapter 3 For someone that's really not that holy, that's a pretty good sermon for ya. I like it a lot, leaves ya hanging for what is gonna happen next, I finally got a ballpark time period for this too if there was one. I really detest Molly >:o |
| Spiky Hair Kid 2003-03-08 . chapter 2 Nice, cute, 2085 word chapter. Gotta love it, I can't wait to find out what will happen next to lil ol' Polly. |
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