I love your story, but I think there should have been a little more longer transition between normal Polly and psycho Polly. It seemed to happen too fast.

I will remember this story forever! I'll tell it to ppl! It was really sweet :) but, sad at the same time XD

this was an inspiring story of a girl who had courage.

What the * is wrong with you? Taking an innocent nursery rythme and turning it into something like this!

MAGNIFICO! I loved it! That is such a evil nursery rhyme I have never heard before untill now. You should make a series, making nursery rhymes into sinister stories

That was great. Well-written, good plot, good character development...jus everything about that fic was great. h0lla

This is a great story..

Well, I can finally review it, so for the last chapter I must say it was quite the ending...I really liked the poem, the part which you wrote, at the end, overall it was fun to read and very interesting, nice short story.

*Applauds wildly* this was one of THE freakiest and coolest horror stories I've EVER read! The ending poem was an especially nice touch...

Wow, cool chapter, I can only imagine how it's gonna end now with Polly goin' all psycho and such.

OMG! Please please PLEASE update this ASAP it is just sososo wonderfully scary!

This story is good. ITs a little bit twisted but it is still good.

Of course I like it, what else would I say? The last paragraph and especially the last sentence I really like. Kinda somber chapter, filled with so much emotion, it's good.

Cool chapter, definitly liked the way you led the reader on to the sex thing and then wham common sense takes over and nothing happens. It's also nice the way you have Polly stand up for herself for story seems all to real for the people that experince what Polly does, it's a shame that it happens in real life.

This does put quite an interesting twist on that innocent little nursery rhyme, and I really like it! Please continue soon!