It makes me think of formaldehyde, for some reason. Corrosive things. This poem is intoxicating, never stop writing.
Gabby

the imagery is great and your flow of words is brilliant! please keep writing!?

omg that is so great. i sound like a melodramatic cheerleader but it truly is!! you're so talented. *click click* in my favs now!

Wow this is really good why can't I write like that you do it so well can't wait to read more

Brilliant.

Simply ** brilliant.

Wahaha! 'Tis a beautiful, beautiful poem. I absolutely love the imagery. ^_~