hey, not bad! the dialogues are excellent...and don't worry about quantity! It's quality that counts!! ehehekeep it up...and good luck!

Hi Larissa!
I am your #1 fan for these stories. Haha.
But I am confused. Okay what the heck?
When "Larissa" trips over a tree root and then loses conciousness,then how does she wake up at the Fraternity party?
I thought she was still unconcious after tipping on the tree root? How did she get to the party? ...
LOL. Thanks.
Sincerely Sara
(keep up the good work)

Hey, everyone, thanx for reading and reviewing my story!! If you have any questions, review or e-mail me!! Thanx again!

Ack! Larry, you **! That' sit, no more FFIX for you till you write anorher chapter! Lol, I didn't know I was one of the "best dancers" in H.S. and college! And, hello, where in the hell was I when you were, um, yeah... I must be even more blonde than I thought...

hm, what's going on here? please continue!!