this was cute.. i enjoyed reading it and it made me jealous cause i live in a place where it never snows and only gets cold for 2 weeks a year.. boohoo i miss winter wonderlands :-( lucky

Very eloquent. I enjoyed the dscriptions. No errors.

Oh, that is a beautiful poem. Wish I could write poems like that. Unfortunately, my talent is with stories, not poems.
Keep up the good work! And yes, I'm being lazy again.

~Raevin~