good lyrics. hard to find a tune for them

thanx 4 ur review player! i originally had the 1st verse of this poem in my head as a song.the rhythym n everything just fitted! i added more and here we have it.poem.song.ur choice!

*shrugs* i like it.

well honestly i thought of it more as a poem than a song, but i like it. the meaning is clear. thanks for your review too!