Reviews for The Lost City of Rone

Trapped-Bird 2003-07-09 ch 1,	Really Sweet ^_^ I liked it
PainKiller 2003-06-28 ch 1,	Fabulous! You've done a marvelous job with this. Maybe you should have split the paragraphs, but it's not a big deal, really. Great dialouge.
Knight of Tarian 2003-03-09 ch 1,	Good although the verb tense changed every once in a while. Keep up the good work.
Needa S 2003-03-07 ch 1,	I'm your first reviewer and I'm surprised no one else hasn't reviewed this is a very good story. Maybe if you spaced it some more that may help. People don't want to take the time to weed through it. I know, I had to learn the hard way as well. But I liked it! Keep writing.