|Reviews for Matchstick|
| agnes 8/31/03 . chapter 2
Cute setup here. I like the little-kid narration. I think your occasional author's notes in the middle of the story are a little disruptive to the flow; try keeping it to the top or end of the chapter.
| Eternal Twilight 3/7/03 . chapter 1
Hey, that's a great start. Can't wait for more. _