Wow, this was one of the best poems about the war i've read so far. This poem was clean cut and flowed beautifuly. I also appreciated that you didn't bash the Anti-War people. (Though i am Pro-war.) I was deeply touched by this poem, and that's quite hard to do. ^_^ Good Job, 5,0 points and a cookie to you.

I myself am anti-war, but I have to say, if I'd been undecided before reading this, my mind would be made up differently! Very persuasive style, and though I disagree with the majority of your points, the last lines ring true, too many people know too little facts. Do keep writing!

This is great! I'm going to have to go through all of your stuff one by one!

I tend to disagree with most of your points, but I really enjoyed your poem and I think it was very well written. Keep up the awesome work. :-)

Wow! This was really well written! I agree with all your points!

I'm pro-war as well. I really like the way you express yourself. Not many are for the war, I think that they aren't thinking about the people like my dad who fight in wars, without war, we'd have never gained our independence, our freedom, everything we have came from the result of some war, big or small.

I have a quick question, have you ever seen the movie "Endless Waltz"? It's about war and how it's and endless waltz of peace, war and something else I can't rember, but I think it's rebuilding. That and I shudder to think of a world where no wars were ever fought and we just bent to others will (not a pretty picture).

Great Job
~Jo~

I disagree with your view, but I'll focus instead on the poem itself.

Good work! I really liked the words you chose!

Erm. what else? Hmm. Oh blergh, I can't think of anything else. Just one thing, though. Most people (conservatives included) don't know what's going on with the war. It's not just the liberals. I think there're very few people who have a good idea of some of the background history.

Meh. I'm sorry if offended. If you hate this review, feel free to email me. ^_^

wow! a conservative viewpoint--though I'm more tended to the liberal, peaceful one myself, I must agree with your excellent last three lines.no one seems to know enough of the facts.

A very well thought out piece of poetry. Truely, war is not all bad. You made an excellent point about without war, there would be no peace. Nice job.
-Frodo

"Only the dead have seen the end of war." -Plato

i understand your viewpoint and i have to say that i agree with it.in anti-war but i do not base my decision on the opininons of others.a very informing piece of writing, great job.

I have mixed feelings about war..

However, you're poem was well written. It flowed nicely off the tongue and it was very persuasive.