Very original! I know how it feels, I guess the only thing to explain why this happens is: it's life...
It's kind of like the guy protecting the girl, and finally the girl realizes that she's just as 'great' as the guy if not BETTER! lol
:o)

pretty good and i like the twist at the end you know what, you should
really get these all published.

o...this is really good too...A lot of times people treat me like a dumb little girl..I hate it...I love that song!! it's really cool...though I'm more into system of a down but it's still a really good song...keep writing

Cat