Wow.

o.o That WAS totally disturbing.
Have you seen Bowling for Columbine? It's disturbing too. But yeah. It was a good expression of the sentiment, even if it was disturbing.
Though, part of the reason it's so disturbing is the fact that it could actually happen. I mean, I've thought about it before. I'm pretty sure every "unpopular" person has. Even the so-called 'popular' people may have. I don't know that, though, seeing as I'm not one. . .

Wow. This was long. Arf. Sorry.

ooh i like! it reminds me of the video for pearl jam's "jeremy" It's awesome i love this story!

This story is an engrossing and disturbing examination of an extreme response to being taunted an bullied at school. Don't be afraid to use language to keep it realwhen writing for an R rated audience. Bravo Tenshi keep it up

At least your yami puts up with you *points to Zoi, sulking in the corner* Anyway, Nice fic. Add something to it. Very morbid and dark. . . just the way we like it.