 RuathaWehrling 2003-06-12 . chapter 3Your poetry is pretty good, but it's all got the same rhyme scheme and general cadence. If that's intentional, since it's a set, then that's cool. But if you didn't mean to do it, maybe you should try varying either rhyme or rhythm patterns more, to give your poems some variety. As for content, I REALLY, REALLY liked "The Cursed Siren" and "The Dragon Changer" was good as well. Couldn't really get into the spell one, though, I'm afraid! Probably just not my style. Anyways, you should throw up some more poetry if you write it, because youve got talent! :) Many thanks! |