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RuathaWehrling 2003-06-12 . chapter 3
Your poetry is pretty good, but it's all got the same rhyme scheme and general cadence. If that's intentional, since it's a set, then that's cool. But if you didn't mean to do it, maybe you should try varying either rhyme or rhythm patterns more, to give your poems some variety. As for content, I REALLY, REALLY liked "The Cursed Siren" and "The Dragon Changer" was good as well. Couldn't really get into the spell one, though, I'm afraid! Probably just not my style. Anyways, you should throw up some more poetry if you write it, because youve got talent! :) Many thanks!
VladimirsAngel 2003-03-13 . chapter 2
I think I like this poem best out of the three here - but have no idea why, unfortunately! They all have a really good rhythm to them and this one feels like it should be chanted.
Winged One1 2003-03-09 . chapter 2
Awesome! Dragons rock. I really liked this poem >Winged One
Winged One1 2003-03-09 . chapter 1
Wow, this is really awesome. I like it. >Winged One
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