I love japanese... I would like to learn but... I know some words though. Must tell you... Wonderful poem! ^-^
*Omedetou*

Well, I luff anime songs in Japanese more than English . . . and I can sort of understand it, too (i checked the translation and i was pretty close) Beautiful . . . but maybe that's just the otaku in me talking^^

ooh, beautiful...the japanese version is undisputably better...^^ says the anime obsessive girl...but great job...meh...

~~alli~~

wow! are you japanese? or just fluent with it?

the poem was great! ^_^

It rhymes!!
Wow, simply amazing!
I love japanese poetries^^!!

Completely clueless

::let's move to the english version::

kakkoii desu!

it almost seems like it could be a song. its good