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| Vaquel 2003-09-16 ch 1,   | Lots of questions without any answers! "Could we get past this past?" - my favorite line. I love using the same word for more than one meaning, especially together like that when it makes sense to. "Could I learn to be loved??" - the only one with 2 question marks, even. ::sigh:: some people just don't know what it is to be loved, it's true... and sad. I am thinking of one female in particular who I come close to smothering with genuine love, and she has no clue, because to her, love is being mistreated and looked down upon. Hmm, I should write a poem about it... |
| Starlight Maiden 2003-09-16 ch 1, | I think the last line is the best, just tops it all off. |
| CrystalDreamer620 2003-05-01 ch 1, | insightful...and rhyming...and just about everything you could ever want in a poem. keep it up! |
| not sure yet 2003-03-19 ch 1, | interesting, i like it though, has an air of mystery about it, nicely done |
| Silently Audible 2003-03-08 ch 1, | Great poem! I like the questioning style of the poem and the use of the internal rhymes, and genrally a good piece of work :) P.S thanks for reviewing all my works. |
| Sakura Urimeshi 2003-03-08 ch 1, | Well it's pretty obvious I like poetry otherwise I would'nt be here. I'm an avid writer myself and as a fellow poet, KUDOS TO YOU! ^_^keep up the fantastic work! |