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| Magpie Poet 2003-05-01 ch 1,  | abuse:) information is hard to find, esp with american journalisitic **. try like british or australian news sites (or better yet other foreign ones if you speak other langauges) |
| Princess Mulan 2003-04-23 ch 1, | abuseVery good thoughts, utterly confused, not indiffer4ented. great writing. |
| Master Haku 2003-03-27 ch 1, | abuseI think everyone's confused about the war. I'm antiwar, but that's just because i think war in general is pontless, i don't really know that much about what's going on. As lots of people pointed out, the last two lines are really good. love it. bushorchimp.com is a funny site! |
| Bloody Death 2003-03-19 ch 1, | abusewe all confused about this stupid war. Good poem |
| NovaKayne 2003-03-12 ch 1, | abuseI love love love love LOVE the last two lines. Somehow you've managed to capture exactly what I feel in those two lines alone. |
| Wolfychann 2003-03-10 ch 1, | abuseThe reason a lot of people can't give you good answers about the war thing is that they don't know themselves. They may have an opinion but that doesn't mean they know why we're going to war or what the effects will be. I proudly include myself in that category; I'm against the war because it's unprovoked and destructive, but ask me the details of Bush's charges against Saddam, or what we know about Iraq's arsenal, and I'll just sorta blink at you and say "I don't know, but I think Bush is stupid." And even that opinion is based more on his grammar errors and that website with the chimp pictures than on actual facts. |
| Hopes Forgotten 2003-03-09 ch 1, | abuseThat's really good, I like how you end it. |
| pje 2003-03-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseits okay to say you are confused. but asking people isn't the only way to get information, you can read things too. great job! |
| Angelic Hooligan 2003-03-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseDitto. Totally. |
| Cheyenne 2003-03-08 ch 1, | abuseDitto. Here's a tip on understanding war: You can't, because its pointless. The day you understand it is the day you've lost your innocence, and alhough you shouldn't be completely sheltered, don't get to a point where you see justification in death. |