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| Jenny Hatter 2007-10-20 ch 1,  | abuseGosh, I've never felt so touched before. This is a really sweet drabble/whatever you call it. It's like all those little words strung together and their deeper meaning. So cute. I love it! ;) |
| Chiclets 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abuseHm, I like this very much because it's a fairly accurate representation of how, I assume, many people feel when trying to express a message like that. All fumbling around and never really being able to say it. Very nice. :) |
| incandescent.smiles 2006-05-01 ch 1, | abusethis was a great way to show that sometimes people can't say what they mean, and others have to (in this case, literally) read between the lines. I do this kind of thing all the time- ramble without knowing quite what I mean, and just hoping the other person somewhat gets it. I love this, it's a pretty awesome idea, and a good way to present it. ~Leila* |
| kuroi-urufu 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseI like it. It hits home because my best friend Donny did the same thing when he told me he loves me. Odd how when you think your the only one, there are so many others out there. Nice story all together. |
| Amour Amorita Saphira 2005-06-28 ch 1, | abuseWow.. I'm speechless.. I'm serious. I mean I've definately been thourgh this before and it's just.. you express it very well. It's like u just wanna say it out yet u just can't and if u did, what would that person think. would it be enough proof? or you know or 'u' r just not enough for them even if u say those words.. I've been so there.. Love this. short but very nice and satisfactory^^ just great^^ |
| featherlight 2004-04-14 ch 1, | abuse*adds to favorite stories* Wow. This was wonderful. The formatting was a brilliant little touch that set everything else off...that paragraph/word pattern. The dialogue was amazingly realistic. The character rambled a little, and stuttered, but that's why I liked it so much. That's why it's so *real*. Beautiful, brilliant. I love it. |
| charredrose 2003-05-27 ch 1, | abusegod, yes. it's like, the three words aren't good enough, or they're too good. you can't just out and say them. this hits way too close to home for comfort. |
| Princess Mulan 2003-04-23 ch 1, | abusewoo, very strong and powerful emotions! Great writing. I love the all the strong feelings here. |
| Ann Lee 2003-04-20 ch 1, | abusevery powerful-I like it. |
| wheresmydopamine 2003-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI ramble a lot too. Heh, I like the way you've set it out. Very effective. |
| Master Haku 2003-03-27 ch 1, | abuseWOW - that was really great. it was just so sweet and real. farewell, i am off to read more of your stuff! |
| N. Fae 2003-03-19 ch 1, | abusewow...just...wow...so realistic...wow |
| NovaKayne 2003-03-12 ch 1, | abusethat's so cool!! the coolest idea for a poem. i never would've thought to write something like that; and it's so real!! you're such a great writer. i look forward to u uploading more stuff. |
| Wolfychann 2003-03-10 ch 1, | abuseTo me, "three little words" will always mean just one phrase: Klaatu Barata Nikto. But since you aren't a big geek like me. This is a little confusing at first, pretty damn touching once I got it. Reading between the lines can tell you a lot, I guess. |
| Angelic Hooligan 2003-03-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked this. It was. . . cool. An inadequate word, but oddly fitting nonetheless. |