...far out...
perhaps a couple of mildly clumsy words...but their numbers are few, and ultimately get beat to hell by the grace of the rest of the piece...
bravo

even though this poem is sad it has a great sense of power.. power formt he inside. and power from the earth. and female power. it's amainzg. also your words are beautiful. they trickle down the page. you're very talented. this is pure emotion turned art

Most definitely something I can relate to and very nicely written. Great imagery throughout it and the way it was broken up was quite effective with aiding the mood of the piece. Awesome.

Kudos and daisies.

-Jess

Yeah, I love this. It's so true! Okay, I actually have a constructive comment. I think I do at least. In the line:
'So hear I am!'
Is hear supposed to be here?
I didn't even notice that until I'd read it about four times.
But, besides that, it's perfect!

m. very nice and.. uh... spiritual, i think is the word. I know that "alone" feeling that you're talking about. Kina sucks, huh? Kind of like how some people feel utterly alone in the middle of a crowd-- I know I do! But here's my advice-- well, nevermind, actally. I'm not entirely sure how to put it, and I think it goes against every moral code anyone preaches... *cough*

So beautiful!
Isn't the rain itself a part of Her?
But i know what you mean.
-morgan moonsphinx

yes, we DO all feel that way. this is really great (can you say that? really great?) as always!

that was beautiful. i love it. full of faith and power and yet longing and sorrow. but do not worry, search inside yourself, the mother is in us all. she would not desert you, her child. keep faith and you will find her. could you pleez r/r one of my poems, thanx

It is just nicely written.
To answer why you are so alone, because you are capricious!
Write on!

It is SCHOPENHAUER!