Well Cazzaa, I think you just explained my personality in that girl. Funny how bad it feels to be like that eh? Well anyway, i'm determined to give a qualty review this time.

The writting itself is good, though I think at times you take advantage of this style of yours for lack of proper knowlege on more traditional forms. This however is not a bad thing, just an observation. Your unique style, as usual, weather from ignorance, or purpose, is refreshingly different, and I find very enjoyable. It actually leaves the story to be read on its own merrit and not on any other. I find the actualy story one that I have no doubt many people can relate to, and have little reservations in praising. I truely enjoyed this piece. Thanks once again for helping me, and I'm sure many others, see what we so often fail to notice right in front of us, but can learn so much from once seen. Cheers!

- Vigilant

Hey, Thanks for reviewing my story. I really like this. It's very powerful.
Good work. :)

very, very well written and wicked easy to relate to...can you tell i'm from boston? :)

Ahh yes. That deep style of yours.
I like this story. So Bitter-Sweet.
Your short works really shine.

Interesting, you've got the basis for a good story.please add more.but i like that it ambigious..don't get trapped in cliches..you've got something orginal in format here.

That was really good.

hiyaz great story! I think u deal with the idea of jealousy very well.

You know, I just have to review this story. It is so simple, yet so real. You are able to say a lot with very few words. What's more, the feelings that you get across are clear. I can picture this scene in my head, and that is what makes it so forceful.

I loved this short story.it reflected a lot on my own personality. I saw your review upon my own work, and decided to check out yours. I'm impressed.