I'm am stoked. Really.

As much as I hate tragedies, this was fabulous. It ended on a good note and I'm glad it ended the way it has.

wow. this was an awesome story. and you were only 14.

I'm so surprised you don't have more reviews and I can honestly say it IS one of the best stories I've ever read. It made me cry! Not even published novels make me cry as much as I did when I read this. It was like a rollercoaster ride I wouldn't mind going on again, although it made me sad that Mortenez died, but to be honest it added to the wonderfusl story.

I adore historical stories (even if they aren't historically correct) and I absolutely love this story so much! I praise you and your talent.

One thing I really like is that your characters have flaws and I as the reader can see them

As a little side note... I wanted to know... what happened to Claude? He seemed to disappear after he was kidnapped, whether this was intentional or not, I am not sure, but I am curious

Oh my goodness.

You have no idea how much the story resounded in my heart. Ah...

It's amazing.

I loved it. In the beginning, it was a bit slow and hard to connect with, but with each chapter your ability to warm up to your characters grew and grew. By the end, I was having to hold back tears.

I cannot believe you were fourteen when you wrote this. Unbelievable. Great talent.

Someday, consider publishing- I believe you can make it.

Excellent Work,

Carrie

I would just like to mention that Mary Magdalene was not Jesus' mother, she was the one he drove the demons out of and forgave.

Simply excellent.

I adore this story! The characters are precious. But wait a second, but didn't you say earlier that Elayne was born during the Fourth Crusade? Then how could she be in her twenties during the Third?

None too bad so far!

i liked the line where she siad there is nothing like holding someone you love

What happened to poor little Claude?

Holy shit! I just read this author's note after I reviewed the epilogue. You're only 14(or...16 now...)! Wow! That doubles my amazement! You write like you're an adult! Holy crap. I'm so jealous...

Wow. I'm utterly speechless! This story is fantastic! Marvelous! Totally awesome! I loved this story. One of the best I've read here on FP. A fabulous story. A great read.

This story creates a realistic atmosphere even if it may not all be historically correct (I skipped ahead to read your historical note) I've enjoyed what I've read so far. Gwenour isn't exactly nice but I like her anyway because she's a little like me, and hey, everyone has flaws. Anyhoo... I'll read more of this as soon as I can.

this is so cool...

I find your style pretentious in the extreme, and much of the esoteric (and even some of the more common) vocabulary you attempt is misused. As a result, the story reads very awkwardly and the overall effect is nothing short of irritating.