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Reviews For: The Present, A Story of Tranquility - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

skyesque
2003-07-27
ch 3,
hey, tranquility is ruled by young people -_-;; madi is 12, caed is 15.. aren't there any old elders guiding?
skyesque
2003-07-27
ch 2,
ahh, madison is some future fortune-teller!! ahha, and what's with michael? btw, she's twelve, but in eighth grade? super smart!
skyesque
2003-07-27
ch 1,
good story t'sa, lol, did i review already?? anyways, cold limenade tastes nasty, esp if you don't have sugar! =/
Silver Magiccraft
2003-07-01
ch 12,
great chapter...I loved the talks, mostlyu because nearly everything or really everything is true...I love that...telling the truth...Update soon...
Sayonara



~~Silv~~
SJ
2003-06-24
ch 11,
can't wait for more! update soon!
SJ
2003-06-24
ch 10,
hmm...
great chapter..i'm going to read the next one now!
Silver Magiccraft
2003-06-24
ch 11,
Interesting chapter. I like it. So please hurry with the next chapter, k?
Sayonara



~~Silv~~
Silver Magiccraft
2003-05-23
ch 9,
Great chapter. didn't see any mistakes. Hope to see more soon...
Sayonara



~~Silv~~
SJ
2003-05-18
ch 8,
ooh!! another new chapter!! i really love this story!! update soon k/
shadowed memory
2003-05-17
ch 2,
I really like this story so far. It's interesting and makes me want to know more. I haven't had time to read the whole thing but I definitely will!
Silver Magiccraft
2003-05-17
ch 8,
I like it! This is a great chapter, and so much of it is so true! So keep on writing, you have a good story here, so keep up the great work!
Sayonara



~~Silv~~
Silver Magiccraft
2003-05-05
ch 7,
tis really really good. sorry for the short review,i'm eating and typing with only one finger...
sayonara


~~silv~~
SJ
2003-04-08
ch 5,
ooh!! this story's so cool! pls post soon! i can't wait to read more!!
Shades Of Autumn
2003-04-04
ch 4,
This chapter was good!

I've gotta go off internet now, so this'll be the last review for today, but tommorow I'll come back and review!

~Autumngold
Shades Of Autumn
2003-04-04
ch 3,
THIS STORY IS THE BEST! I LOVELOVELOVE IT!

It also has a lot pf freaky coincidences.

1: Madison acts like me. (apart from magic powers, but what I wiouldn't give to have 'em!)
2: I'm 13 years old.
3: My star sign is Sagittarious.

hehehehe!
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