 hellomoto 2006-04-18 . chapter 24i really ejoyed this story have you thought about doing a sequel |
 becxfok01 2005-05-12 . chapter 24I just discovered this story today, and OMG, I love it. The title is perfect, it IS bittersweet. But more sweet than bitter I suppose, since they DID find each other in the end. It was wonderful to see Chloe grow up and make new friends, and to see how Oliver found true love. I applaud that you made Oliver sound really British and Chloe American. (Are you British or American?) The only disappointment was that I didn't think there was enough Oliver and Chloe time together, but that's only because I love romance stuff. Good job with this story! I really liked it, and if you do finish editing this story, pls email me to let me know so I can reread it! Thanks. |
 UNwitty182 2004-12-25 . chapter 24Your story is really cute... |
 Coin 2003-10-07 . chapter 1 Great story, loved it! only problem was that the ending was rather abrupt. you may want to consider adding an epilogue, maybe? |
 Kirstills (can't be arsed to sign in) 2003-09-05 . chapter 24 * Kirsty claps very loudly and laughs at her stupidity because the wonderful author of the story can't hear *
I loved it! You SO have to do a sequel! Wow! You can definetely write, wow, you should be publishing for books, not fictionpress! |
 tigress33 2003-08-21 . chapter 24The ending was a bit abrupt after all this build-up, and things are still uncertain in their future. Why couldn't Oliver just ask to take a break from the tour or something like that? What was in the envelope? It seemed rather anti-climactic which was unfortunate because everything leading up to the ending was wonderful. But ending a story is always hard, so I get that. Perhaps a sequel or something might help resolve the unanswered questions and future. |
 ngt 2003-08-17 . chapter 23omgod!
When r Chloe and Oliver going to get back with eachother!?
I love ur story, it should be published... |
 The Highwaywoman 2003-08-13 . chapter 23 It's been a long time since I've had the time to read this. I'm glad I went back to it. I love Oliver's character... It's cute how you made Riley gay... I feel bad for Chloe though. She needs some hot lovin' from Oli, methinks... ;) |
 rare-blue-moon 2003-08-13 . chapter 23wow that was umm intresting, I dont think any of us expected him to be gay. but yeah I've been readong this since like chapter 8 and I think youre doing a really good job! no wait I take that back an AWESOME job! Keep up the good work and please dont keep us in suspense for long |
 II Pinay II 2003-08-11 . chapter 22 wow!! ur story relly good! lolz...uugh but chloez mom...r...i cud jus kick her...haha...i hope chloe findz out soon that her mom iz a lyin backstabbin -...sryz i jus dont relly lyk her much...hah..wel update SOON...buhbyz |
 jad 2003-08-04 . chapter 21 it's great! keep going, i see what happens when and if oliver and chloe met again. keep writing! |
 Contia Mirian 2003-08-04 . chapter 21Hey, I'm back. Good job. |
 tigress33 2003-07-31 . chapter 21Wow, I so was not expecting these turn of events. But it sounds good, it'll be great when Chloe finds out Oliver had been her whisperer and tiger-lily deliverer. Keep up the great work! |
 pink-perk-2007 2003-07-30 . chapter 1DONT PUBLISH THIS! MAKE IT INTO A MOVIE! sorry, i just really LOVE ur story and i think that it would get more exposer if it were made into a movie :) if u do publish it OR make it into a movie, e-mail me and ill be the first to read/watch it! |
 pink-perk-2007 2003-07-30 . chapter 21u better get a copyright on this! i swear! it would make one hell of a movie! id go see it! |