 avani.neglect 2003-07-10 . chapter 1forgive me for being blunt, but it sounds like you're talking about two different people.
nice job. |
 aznchick 2003-03-15 . chapter 1decisions decisions!! ah!
beautifully written by the way =] you've explained the dilema quite perfectly with analogous writing.
~Aznchick |
 M@Dy 2003-03-11 . chapter 1I really like this. It has a certain twist to it that I don't see often. The comparisons that you used were terrific also. I love the last sentece, I know the exact feeling. |
 Andiavas 2003-03-10 . chapter 1this seems an interesting story. please continue!
wow, this story has a lot of meaning in it, can't wait till the next chapter ^_^! |