and than what happens don't leave me hanging what is going to happen to gabriel and daniel are they going to hell?

O_O Yow, good guy turned bad. I wonder if he'll ever see poor Daniel again. It's interesting the way you portray heaven and all that. I think it's quite origional. My story is a bit long, and it's yaoi, but I think your style exceeds mine by a lot. ^_^

Okay, second chapter done. As I said, I feel so sorry for Gabriel! He seems like such a sweet person. Ahh opposites attract. I hope this doesn't end in tragedy...

Khlern here. This would be the chapter you submited to the contest, then. ^_^ I really like it. Your writing style is so poetic. You sure are better at description than I am. I still need to go over my own stories and fix them up a bit.

Sorry I didn't read and review your story resently, I was really busy!! Forgive and forget, right? right. Write more and power to you.

I love how you put so much emotion into them. It just makes the characters come alive and seem so real. I love how the chapters end to make you want to keep reading and wanting more. They are beautifully written! Ps. I am working on the editing for ur stories and I shour have Crescendo done today! ^_^

Hey, I am liking this( but of course I will it your work and you do excellent stories^^V). I am going to continue reading this tomorrow, but you now have my undivided attention.

Ja~ne

Kill the evil cliffhangers!! Great chappy, sorry that i didn't review chpt.2, i did read ut though. keep up the good work. Oh, and neat how you put Gabe as an angel, my friend did that once...

Good beginning, you have to continue with it. The clifhanger is evil though. MORE MORE.

Pretty good. I just don't appreciate your dissing of canadians. We are not weird, it's you americans that are weird.

Well I probably just proved your point. Oh well, keep writing.