A very powerful underlying message in this poem. I loved the line "at night beneath the fog caked skies." As usual, another excellent poem! Keep writing :)

*cosmo-queen*

Once again, fantastic work!

Ah...such powerdul words used.

I like the last stanza best!

*wipes eye* you are so amazing. how many times have i said that now? i dont know how many but honestly you are. you could compile all your poetry into a book and EASILY publish it. I would defintily without a doubt buy that book!

holy shit, this is so good.

Vivid and powerfull!

T.L. Demeter

Outstanding! Welcome back I have missed your poetry you are very talented. I used to be Smiley-Bear but I changed my name. Thank-you for the review! Keep writing.

this is yet another interesting poem that has not failed to capture my imagination. u describe a man devoid of everything around him, takin destruction and turning it into beauty, takin the pain of others and brushing it off as if nothing. he walks the earth as if life means nothing to him, but also as if he is searching for an escape. this is a very interesting poem indeed and, altho its a repost, its still a wonderfully detailed and deep poem that pretty much everyone can relate to in one way or another (im fairly sure everyone has felt this way at one point or another in their life, as if nothing matters anymore, as if life is merely the existence in which we walk the world searching for the unattainable, which could very well be Death at sometimes.)

again, a very nice poem that im glad to have read, really made me think n go somewat indepth, if for the moment. ill prob let u know wat i thought more when i see u online. till then, take it easy.

Neo

Powerful, disturbing imagery! Very well written.

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Wonderful and powerful poem. Marvelous imagery as always. Good to see more poetry from you in any form. Keep up the excellent work. I eagerly await more of your work. The world of poetry has missed your touch, my dear :). Peace.

Absolutely beautiful. I was afraid you would never post anything again. I'm relieved to see this one. You haven't lost the touch, oh no. Btw, will you ever finish writing your fantasy story? I was rereading again. Anyway, keep it

That's so beautiful. filled with so much imagery, emotion. The details, its descriptions are quite unique. It's an excellent poem, keep it up. :)