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Suicidal Skies 2005-05-05 . chapter 1
Lol, cyute!
NeoFight 2003-06-23 . chapter 1
hehe That's great! Definetely something I can relate too. (Except on Saturday... gotta love early morning cartoons... even though I'm probably too old for them... hm)
RavenPhoenix 2003-05-28 . chapter 1
This is cute! heehee Great Job

*formerly Cinnamon13*
Sorry for the name change ;)

RavenPhoenix
SolsticeMidnight 2003-05-17 . chapter 1
I love this.. probably my favorite writing of yours. Cute, true, and very well done!
Catella Estelle 2003-05-13 . chapter 1
Heheheh! Mondays are horrid days!
Love this!
Great work!

~ Little Dog Muse
wheresmydopamine 2003-05-09 . chapter 1
Heh, it's weird that this poem's about sleeping 'cause the rhythm's so bouncy.. Cute though, I love it!
Thomasina Aquina1 2003-05-01 . chapter 1
Ah! Brilliantly put. I like this poem, very cute and very true. You're lucky you can konk out on the floor. My bedstand wakes me up by hitting me on the head.
Blackmaskgirl 2003-05-01 . chapter 1
Hahaha...this is so cute! I'm the say way, not just on Mondays either.

Thanks for reviewing my work. I look forward to reading more of yours.
Shy Violet Fae 2003-04-18 . chapter 1
I've done that more than once...I fell asleep almost everywhere I sat down for more than 10 seconds. luckily it wasn't at school, it was on a sort of field trip thing.
Nekosama who is too lazy to sign in 2003-04-15 . chapter 1
Haha, that is me every day of the week! lol, it captures the feeling nicely. Excellent ^_^
George 2003-04-07 . chapter 1
it sounds just like me in the morning i'm going to make an Illistration of it(eventualy)
Carissa 2003-03-29 . chapter 1
GOOD! it reminds me of good dreams when you dont want to get up!
Queen of the Universe 2003-03-28 . chapter 1
Do you like sugar a lot? Can I join you on the clouds? It sounds like fun.
Mike 2003-03-28 . chapter 1
I think you did a good job on this poem! Nice work!
OptimisticRomantic 2003-03-27 . chapter 1
I do the same thing. Haha. I shut off the alarm and get out of bed listening to my mom rant then i go on the floor and lay down and fall back asleep. Good poem. Very catchy!

~Sandra~
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