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Reviews For: Seneca State University - Reviews: Page 1 of 29

CharlieandLola
2008-11-03
ch 1,
hello. i am sucked in it is reminding me of the many good books i have read put together!
Navaura
2008-10-09
ch 3,
I have a question, what exactly is wrong with Kiara? She does seem a bit childish, but she can't be mentally embalanced or something, because if she was, she wouldn't be at the college.

I love the way Lynette and Randall's reaction toward one another is. They definately have that physical attraction going on. I also have some other questions, like is everyone in this story beautiful? It's almost sad that things didn't work out for Paul and Cathy, but if they had, Brent wouldn't be there. It's not that Cathy doesn't know he has feelings for her, it's that she doesn't want to admit and believe that it's possible because of the way he behaved their freshmen year. I think those two are going to irk my nerves, because they're probably the type to deny the inevitable till the end. I hate that. I like that you added people from the less glamorous side of life. I was smiling cause I think it's a well rounded story now.

Especially with Lynette, her being from the south and all. I'm from Mississippi, so I just smiled when I heard her talk. Anyway, this was a good chapter. A few wrong word usage, but overall good.
NAVAURA~
Navaura
2008-10-06
ch 2,
So, far, I've read the first two chapters and already have a favorite character. Sierra. I like her, cause she's from Arizona and she has a lot to learn about being outside the reservation. I'm interested to see what her experience at Seneca state is going to be like.

Shanequa definately has some irritable issues going on. She's severely annoying and a schematic person with a brain the size of a pea, literally, but who can blame her with the kind of life style she grew up in.

Cathy's pretty level headed. I like that in her. She's cool.
Chris is awesome. He seems like the type that could bounce back from anything except love. Judging by his discription of Kiara, angels white dress and dainty...hmmn, he's a bit fantacy like. He lives in fantacy land when it comes to finding his mate. His description of Kiara is a bit too feminine I believe.

Kiara is sweet, but like Chris, and I'm interested to see how their relationship go.

As for Brent, he's sort of afraid. He and Cathy are afraid. I like him though. He's pretty well grounded into reality.

Lewis...ah, I like him as well. I love his boldness. He's the brother you want backing you up when something happens, cause he won't be afraid. Nor will chris. I really like Lewis's flirtatiousness, but I think he puts it on rather thick.

Scotty, don't know much about him yet.

So far, the two chapters are good. Long, but good.
nrns_azn
2008-07-31
ch 28,
This is a great story! It's really good work. I've only reviewed now because lately i was so into the chapters and wouldnt waste a second doing something else other than reading this! If you complete this story please make a sequel!
Love your story!
dreamercrys
2008-06-28
ch 41,
Woot! I love this story. Can't wait to see how everyone reacts to Kiara's new look...
CHatterGirl
2008-06-27
ch 41,
Kiara is trying something new? I can't wait to read Chris response.
Macy
2008-06-25
ch 41,
Hi I've been reading your story for a long time now and I'm glad you're updating. Keep up the good work and don't leave us again until this story is finished.
ChatterGirl
2008-06-19
ch 40,
Oh I sorry you lost the other chapters, that sucks, but I like this chapter. I thought Deirde would make another appearance and I was right. It's not over between her and Chris,yet. Poor Kiara she should stand up for herself instead of letting that D girl talk down to her. Write again soon!
0.0 NightRiders 0.0
2008-06-18
ch 38,
AHK! YOURE ALIVE!
AND WELL!
hello :) i never see you anymore, your nebver her, well im glad you havnt given up this story, this truly is wonderful

i love chapter 40, but i think youve over written the last chapter you wrote because it told me that i already had reviewed it and that i could do the last one before that as well, that explains why im reviewing this

well i have to go, busy life and so clse to the summer hildays!!

youre awesome,, always
ciao!
Sam
X
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2008-06-17
ch 40,
I just discovered this story and I love it! More ASAP please!
noon
2008-03-14
ch 39,
very good story! just got one problem the format yep it's really hard to read but other than that it good!
Elle Winters 9
2008-01-10
ch 41,
ARGH NO!!
i really hope you update soon. From your published date you can really see that it takes you around about forever to update ;)
and ive just read the whole 41 chapters in 1 day!
this really is a great story. its full of so much drama. hm mayb it culd become lyk a drama series..it sounds lyk sum korean drama but way more intersting and dramatic and not as dragged out. it wuld b great to watch, when you sell this idea and become famous rmemeber me. =P this story is incredibly great!
please please update soon. i'll be missing this until you update, and very much too.
Lochi
2007-11-25
ch 1,
I love it. SO many people at the beginning but your desription of them is great, I can imagine them like real persons. oh and they all sound hot lol
inconfusion
2007-11-18
ch 41,
So I just started reading your story yesterday afternoon and I finished all 41 chapters by the next morning. I really love your story and the characters in it. I hope you updated soon because I can't wait to see what happens next! Great work!
Kari4
2007-11-16
ch 41,
Nice Chapter. Thanks for the preview of the next chapter, it seems interesting, especially concerning Faze and Cathy. I didn't imagine there was anythiong between them, but maybe I was wrong.
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