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Reviews For: Defending Fort Holly

PainKiller
2003-06-28
ch 1,
abuseA very original concept, which you flushed out well. Good clastic wording.

One note. Just a personal preference, but I usually put a few lines in between my actual work and my author's notes.
Trapped-Bird
2003-06-06
ch 1,
abuseI loved it.

Genius how you took a normal childish game, and turned it into a "War"
Karbini27
2003-06-02
ch 1,
abuse~_~there's like, no gap between your A/N and the last paragraph."still shooting foam darts of death"-sounds like your brother lol. Coolness. And you finally got your review!
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