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| NumeroUnoFan 2004-04-07 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis is quite good. Sob. However, you've a long way to go before answering questions such as why Dread Lady is mad and whether she shall every be saved from her evil amulets. |
| Karma50 2003-10-25 ch 5, anon. | abuseHahaha. That was cool, and even I felt a bit star struck when Dread was talking to Sirus. |
| Alma Linda 2003-10-24 ch 5, | abuseMe, Myself, and The Other Me, have come to an agreement. Me thinks this is very good, and Myself is very pleased because the other me is very very excited to see what happens. (heehee!!) Good job on characterizing swwigy .^_^. this was well written and im so excited to read more! everyone is so young here... does that mean ill be like... 9 when im introduced? O.o? |
| The HG man 2003-10-04 ch 4, | abuseHey! Another great chapter Red! Heh, Dread seemed like she was getting on her teacher's nerves in the beginning there with all those questions... ^_^ Keep up the good work Red! The ever illusive, Hyper Guyver |
| Electron Chan 2003-10-03 ch 4, | abusevery nice ^.^ |
| Karma50 2003-10-01 ch 4, anon. | abuseI dont like Dubium. Seems pretty evil. I hope Darkshin kicks some...! You get me...and Dread too of course. Almost typed Fred there, hehe. Darkshin and Dread sitting in a tree... |
| Adro 2003-06-16 ch 3, | abuse... Umm good story. Of course it's kinda strange that you are called dread lady because of a little shaman... And how does not reme,bering what you did mean you have the mark of darkness? Well you said it yourself and I agree, this chapter wasn't as good as the others. Kinda boring and the action part didn't really leave you with a sense of wanting to know what would would happen next. Anyway don't want to be mean, 'm sure I could find problems with my story also. |
| Alma Linda 2003-06-10 ch 3, | abuseFamiliar stranger, huh? hehe, niice... ^^ I'm so sorry that i have seemed to become more and more apathetic to what goes on here in the wired... i suppose i was more into reality lately.. but, if you'll take me back.. i would very much like to return... I'M TIRED OF HAVING GUYS LOOK UP MY SKIRT! and then having Master want to kill them... T-T stupid paul... Anyways... I love this.. the chapter is great.. I like your descriptions of everything.. the counsel seems mean at first.. who on earth could have better things than meet you?!?!?! O_O I like the sword and training!! that is so cool... and your first battle!! O_O WOW! NO WONDER YOU ARE DREAD! *faints* thats what i would do.. just faint... O_O this is soo cool... i cant wait to read more... i'm working on fixing my disk, and when its done i swear on my soul that i'll update! *hugs and runs away* bai! cs |
| The HG man 2003-06-05 ch 3, | abuseYay! Another cool chapter! ^_^ Wow, we find out more to the past that is "DREAD LADY!" ^_^ cool! Well, another fabulous chapter Red! The Ever Illusive, Hyper Guyver |
| Jay Lee 2003-04-04 ch 1, | abuseAh... Nicely written. I see that you hav a thing for strong female characters. The doctor said my eyes will heal in 5 days x_0 |
| Swwigy 2003-03-31 ch 2, | abuseWrite more write more write more! Anyhow Miss Red, can't wait till you bring my character in, so write write write!! |
| Karma50 2003-03-31 ch 2, anon. | abuseHiya! It's kind of confusing, the darkness and evil thing but I think I get it. It could just be because I am school and that is sucking all the energy from me. Hmm, Hipachi is a smart girl. You should never give a stranger dressed in all black with a weapon your full name. But has she completely lost it! She let this same stranger take her to another dimension and she LEFT THE DOG! I am looking forward to finding out what happens. I swear Hipachi is the name of an Indian trible... :o) Karma |
| Alma Linda 2003-03-29 ch 2, | abuseWOW!!1 That is so col! *excited* You're such a good writer, Red! I like this so much! AHH!! Ican't even begin to tell you! *flushes with excitement* This is awesome... I wish i could write a longer review, i used to write the longest reviews imaginable, but i'm really tired all of a sudden and i can't seem to keep my eyes open... will you please forgive me?? *hugs* I really like this, though... i swear it.. cs |
| Chazbone 2003-03-29 ch 2, | abuseWow, that was some introduction. That was pretty cool how you explained to the whole council thing and the warrior born among darkness. Still keep up the story, it is really good. Is the next chapter about Ladies father trying to take her back. That would be cool, go preacher! |
| The HG man 2003-03-13 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was so touching red! I can feel the tears jerking as we speak!... Oh wait that's just the onions... ONIONS?!...Uh, whatever... Anyways, this was cool! ^_^ Nice prelude! Read ya! The ever illusive, Hyper Guyver |