   Lunar Wulf Gemini 2004-01-27 . chapter 1Very creative. Interesting dialogue, plot and characters. |
 animefanatic07 2004-01-16 . chapter 12i'll tell u most of my comments...u made me almost cry! good thing i've been working on that...beautiful chapter...better have a sequel soon!! I MEAN IT! |
 Zeekie 2004-01-16 . chapter 12YAY I GOT A DEDICATION IN THE END! i feel so special...
anywayz that was (another) great chapter and i cant w8 til its published! or until u start writing "Somewhere Out There"! or until...uh...Britannia is a character! YAY FUN!
ok w/ the editing suggestions, put more dialouge in the last chapter, where Julius confronts Rika about being hypnotized and where Nay argues with Venn. That'll increase the lenth (duh) and will sound better
didnt u finish the story at 1:43 pm 2day in earth science? ok nvm...
ONE-OF-YOUR-BIGGEST-FANS,
-Me :P |
| animefanatic07 2004-01-15 . chapter 11 ::sniffle::...::sniffle::...::sniffle::...that was not cool...at all...u better not kill off venn...YOU BETTER NOT! great chapter... |
| Zeekie 2004-01-15 . chapter 11 NO U CHARACTER MURDERER NO
at least u got us all prepared for this at the beginning of the chapter :l
anywayz that was gr8 chapter...disregarding the sad ending i mean...but anywayz, it was really good (havnt i said that b4? anywayz, most of this stuff i cant put into words, thats how gr8 it is)
im hopin u put up the next/last chapter soon...*tear* aw man..its almost finished... |
| Zeekie 2004-01-08 . chapter 10 HEHEHE REVIEW TIME
and i actually remembered 2 sign in this time :P
anywayz this chapter was GR8 as usual...i mean, cmon how can it not be?
and *blah blah blah blah blah blah* the usual stuff that i have 2 say...but i cant w8 4 the next few chapters...hehehe at least we privlidged ppl get first views of the chapters, lol
*soaks with water gun* SEE? hehehe ok ima gonna go now and taunt some other ppl that read this by holding up the hard copy in their faces :P
just kidding anywayz g2g work on MY story (HOW COME NOBODY READS IT?!?!?!?)
-Me >:} |
| animefanatic07 2003-12-21 . chapter 10 aiya...beautiful! as usual! i loved it! EEK! haha...great job with the story! i'll im u with any other long comments...[mostly squealing about how great it was and repeated asking for another chapter XD] |
 Zeekie again 2003-12-21 . chapter 10 NICE CHAPTER! i remember u tellin me about this one...ITS AWESOME!
anywayz, update soon, like...REALLY REALLY SOON |
| You know who i am 2003-11-11 . chapter 9 nice chapter...AND NO ITS NOT CHOPPY so u dont have to redo it :)
ANOREXIA ATHLETICA IS NOT A PERSON!
-Zeekie :) |
| animefanatic07 2003-11-10 . chapter 9 MAKE THEM KISS ALREADY! i swear...you enjoy watching me suffer...sweet story though! |
 Kell Hound 2003-11-10 . chapter 9great job keep writing. |
| Jess 2003-11-09 . chapter 8 hey katie, its jess k from tennis camp. wts up? these stories are really great, and i just finished chap 8. You have some imagination! well keep writin!
cya lata-
~J觧 |
| emily (im too lazy to sgin in) 2003-11-08 . chapter 1 really really good... |
 My New Idol 2003-11-07 . chapter 8HAPPY I FINALLY REVIEWED?!?
its good... and if you dont write faster i'll go ballastic fun right? well keep writeing... and what ive read of ch. 8 is really good -Emily |
| Zeekie-who-is-to-lazy-to-sign-in 2003-11-06 . chapter 8 *presses little button in bottom left-hand corner*
heh heh, good chapter :) swet i remember wen u told us about this 1 :} its rely good, even the little romancy parts, lol
NICE CHAPTER now post again really soon...like...i dunno, tomorrow if u can... :D lol
-Zeekie :) |
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