Wow. This is beautifully creepy. That is not an insult, this poem just manages to make me kind of wonder, kind of pulls some of those strings. You use incredible imagery, and I love the lines, "hanging down from yonder pine, And bleeding out its beauty" They are smooth and majestic lines. I like the idea of eternity and the changing scenes. Great job! Keep up the good work!

Oh, wow... Astonishing poem. Beautiful work.

KEEP WRITING

Amazing, superior! It was really incredible, you described things so well and it was just...Amazing, really. Great job :)

Wow... good stuff... can't properly articulate feelings... sleep deprived... still, good stuff... Keep on writing...

I can't remember if I've already reviewed one of your poems or not. I think that I tired to buy my comp froze. Anyways. This was really good. I can easily relate. Very powerful imagery. But I believe you already said that, didn't you? LoL.

Anyways, in a review that you left me, you *twitched* at the extra K in magick. But I just wanted to tell you that for "believers" or "followers" or whatever you want to call them of Magick, that's how they spell it. I myself used to be one. And even though I'm now back with GOD, I still respect those who do Magick. Which is why I still use the K!

XoXo,
~Lady D.

the first line was absolute beauty! I think you lost some of your romantic images in later verses though. But i loved that last line. So beautiful! Keep writing!

The description in this was awesome!


~Heart of the Sword

great piece! wonderful and very well written! i really like this. neat style. good job! keep on writing!

that was really good, byt kinda of erie(did i spell that right?) it reminded me of the movie "When darkness Falls" i don't know why. Good poem luv it
Angel Nazi ^_^

Erf, it's a little strange and I'm sort of confused, but that could be because I'm on Spring Break and don't really have to think anymore. Narf, anyways, onto the review. You've got some nice flowage and rhythym, there was one mistake, mechanical, nothing too big. Otherwise, I liked it. Good job! And thanks for reviewing my poem, I really appreciate it. ^.^
~Toireasa

this poem rulz. cool.


~*~Rain~*~

Interestin one of yours, your style seems to have morphed slightly, a little less mrobid and a little more nature and imagery oriented. Although theres still the sardonic undertones. we never get rid of lovely little sardonic under tones :grins evilly: I like the repetition and loose rhyme. helps move the poem along.

Interesting.this poem can be applied to alot of things change isn't always good and this is kind of like a reflection back on it.indeed it is schpiffy