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jack 2009-01-06 . chapter 1
I loved this story! I could really relate to it. Good work!I would love to read more of it if you do write more chapters!

Keep writing!
Keiko Yuki 2007-07-10 . chapter 1
That. Was. So. Cute. I love you. Update Send in the ** please! ~Keiko Yuki
Lady E 2007-01-20 . chapter 1
:) Friends are the best inspiration for writers. Sweet, sweet story. Yours always bring me to tears. I hate to throw in a damper, but it makes me shudder to think of Ashley finding life worthwhile only because he is Chris's boyfriend. I think I can understand it, but it's upsetting to know that some people really are that dependant.
dibbles 2006-10-30 . chapter 1
Boo!

I like this story.

It made me smile :)
bansira 2006-09-13 . chapter 1
That was really cute xD

Just to go "Aw..."
Karui Kurayami 2006-06-12 . chapter 1
I just read your story and loved it. It's well written and has a good plot. When you said you might consider doing something else with it, did you mean that you might add more chapters? Or do you mean more one-shots? I'd like either one. You're good at it. I'm going to look at some of your other stories anyway. Something I really liked about this story is that it has depressing themes, but it's not really depressing. (Also, you mispelled the word 'felt' in the fourth paragraph from the end.) I mainly left my e-mail because I like to type it (weird, I know), so I don't want you to feel like you need to reply. I thought about getting a profile here, and I might someday. I mainly stick to fanfiction.net, but I rather like what I've seen here so far.
Zeva 2006-04-22 . chapter 1
Okay, first of all: Aww!! Romance between boys is the best. ^_^

And I absolutely loved this line. '"Can I be your boyfriend?" he asked sheepishly and I nodded vigorously into his hair.

"I'll be your girlfriend."' It made me burst into laughter. It was pretty much the perfect thing to put in and balance the angst - which I also loved.

All in all a fantastic one shot. Though I must admit I wish there was more. Simply because you seem like a very good author. ^.^
rainbowskye 2006-03-21 . chapter 1
I could have sworn I reviewed this the first time I read it. Took me so long to find it again *curses her bad memory* Anyways! I love it. It's the perfect balance between angst and fluff for a one-shot, the characters are swell and the ending. Yay. So nice and happy. I really enjoyed reading it.
SwitchVale 2006-01-19 . chapter 1
oh! I loved your story soo much! I was amazing! Now I can't wait to read the rest of your stories!
Tom 2006-01-06 . chapter 1
Heehee that was awesome!
nOrA 2005-03-30 . chapter 1
you like gay sex? it seems that way. thats cool.
The Fable Fairy 2005-01-29 . chapter 1
beautiful, if a bit cliche. You should try to get this one published...
Posed to Death 2004-10-26 . chapter 1
Ha ha. This is the best angst story I've ever read. Finally. Not really mush, but still a good ending. It makes me smile. :]
Chicken Ice Cream 2004-04-14 . chapter 1
Aww! This story! It's so KAWAII! *pokes it. story squeals and runs away* Nu! More chappies! Please! *chases*
Chicken Ice Cream 2004-04-14 . chapter 1
Aww! This story! It's so KAWAII! *pokes it. story squeals and runs away* Nu! More chappies! Please! *chases*
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