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Reviews For: Proverbial Food Chain
Phoenix 2006-09-21 . chapter 1
Hey, this ones good, are you gonna do anything else to it?
I.F. 2005-09-23 . chapter 1
I think you should continue the story so that Kyle has a chance at happiness!And Raven- Ember is right! I hate bullies too, they SUCK!
Raven-ember 2004-07-27 . chapter 1
OMG, that's so sad! Poor Kyle dosen't deserve to be treated like that! No one deserve to be treated like that! I hate bullies, they're so damn pathetic! Just because they can beat the ** out someone doesn't make them cool, it makes them **! They have no right to make someone feel like ** all the time! Bullies are just sorry excuses of human beings!
Appleofdeadfish554 2004-06-03 . chapter 1
dear lord poor boy...
Angelic Hooligan 2003-03-28 . chapter 1
::whimper:: Poor Kyle. I'll take care of him! Send him to me! I shall cuddle him!
Liz Greimann 2003-03-17 . chapter 1
hey babe! yeah very depressing. lol. yeah meg! gives you a retrospect view of highschool well written. not that you really care what i think. oh love your description about yourself thing very funny made me chuckle meg.
jkb 2003-03-13 . chapter 1
This is so devastating.

Kyle is so hopeless, so broken and you've managed to capture it so perfectly.
I, for one, would love to see you continue this.
Is there a chance that might happen?

Thanks for writing this, it's so heartbreaking.
Great job!

jkb
Lami 2003-03-12 . chapter 1
poor Kyle. can't feel too sorry for him though, unless this has a sequel where he goes Stephen Kink's Cerry on the whole school:)
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