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| TygerTiger 2004-02-09 ch 1, | indeed i understand |
| Kittioto 2003-04-29 ch 1, | ~Raises eyebrow~ ... Interesting. And somehow reminds me of the typical teenage way of thinking. Though I guess it's hard to find a happy-medium for everything in life... perhaps why so many lose themselves to insanity... or commit suicide before their time for death is appropriate... so much life left to live... ... Anywho, I label it "Thought Provoking" once again, and give it my nodd of approval. :) Hmm... |
| Davish 2003-03-12 ch 1, | I like this poem's equivocal tone. There are many ways one can take this poem, which is a good thing, because the more readers there are who can relate to the poem, the better the poem is. In the way that I interpreted the poem I can relate to it. The only complaint I have is the one spelling error ("Loosing" should be "Losing"), which can often times disrupt the reader's state of mind, but beyond that the poem is quite well. Good job! |
| Lady Misery 2003-03-12 ch 1, | Truely touching. You have an excellent way of just making it seem real and poetic at the same time. And, I can really relate to it. Lady Misery; the Shadow Maiden |
| KristyGrace19 2003-03-12 ch 1, | Oh, I can definitely relate to this poem from time to time. the important thing is to remember that writing the poetry and releasing these feelings is a way of NOT keeping it all bottled up inside. ~Kristen |
| Devious Angel XDemon 2003-03-12 ch 1, | ^^ that was great. I really.uh, don't have words on how extremely good it was.so keep up the great work. |
| Sights Unseen 2003-03-12 ch 1, | Wow. That is really really good. I would hear you fall ::dunno how? :: lol, but im saying I care. I don't even know how many times i've felt this way/wrote like this.Keep wrting this is great Mel |
| Tigris 2003-03-12 ch 1, | I can definiely identify with that. I liked it. Well written. |