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| Jane 2006-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi again...I really like this piece. very confrontational, powerful in a way that makes me think of exploding galaxies.Good work.-Jane |
| James Rain 2004-02-02 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a very well thought out work. However, you need to read through it much more carefully and fix grammatical mistakes like your lack of apostrophes and some spelling errors. Then it would be easier to read and betterfor the beauty of the poem. |
| Agent Awesome 2003-03-12 ch 1, | abuseDeep Poem. Good work, I loved it! I just have a couple of tips for you. Number one, try to get your verses sorted out, it was a little hard to read, and number two, it would helped if you spell checked your story before you submitted it! Great job! |
| Semi-charmed life 2003-03-12 ch 1, | abuseI really like this, the way it reads, the way it touches on subjects others are afraid to touch. I like the way you used such imagery and symbolism so that it can be interpretted freely but still with boundaries. Definetly keep writing and read and review some of my stuff if u'd like. Trust me keep writing *Peaceout* |