 Lilli4 2003-03-12 . chapter 1^__^ you didn't think i had given up with reading poetry did ya? lol, so you know moonlight sunrise. hmm. any new poems from her? oh yeah, i remember u know aenoni. get her my message if u can: UPDATE, soon! lol, now for the real reviewing part.
gotta love the ryhmes and your choice of words .really like this part:
Sorrowful grief, chains that bind;
Faith and hope, can't leave behind.
Laughter faded, only tears;
Shattered dreams, my darkest fears.
Hope you write more. did i wish u a wonderful march break?? oh well, have a great one! until next time, bye, ^__^. |