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TTG 2003-07-08 . chapter 1
great poem!
Good rhyming and good meaning...dedicated to preetham..it sounds like her poems too hehe
keep on writing
:)
Lilli4 2003-03-12 . chapter 1
^__^ you didn't think i had given up with reading poetry did ya? lol, so you know moonlight sunrise. hmm. any new poems from her? oh yeah, i remember u know aenoni. get her my message if u can: UPDATE, soon! lol, now for the real reviewing part.
gotta love the ryhmes and your choice of words .really like this part:

Sorrowful grief, chains that bind;
Faith and hope, can't leave behind.
Laughter faded, only tears;
Shattered dreams, my darkest fears.

Hope you write more. did i wish u a wonderful march break?? oh well, have a great one! until next time, bye, ^__^.
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