That was a very good poem. I know this is supposed to be construtive critasizum (sp)but I dont see anything that I would change. ^.^" Good job.

^__^ hey, you got another poem? cool! and it's so optimistic... hm you sure you and moonlight sunrise are connected... poems so different... hers are a bit on the sadder side... now, LOVE the rhymes! uh-oh, so many good parts, dunno which to choose.. oh well, ^__^ can i choose the entire poem as my favourite? ^__^ however, this part definitely stands out to me:
May your dreams and hopes never cease,
Be your heart free and your soul release.
Maybe because of the words dreams and hopes... things we all hold onto as we live our lives... Okay, it's late, i better sneak into bed and sleep... who says you snooze you lose must have forgotten that if you don't sleep you'll lose concentration and focus for the next day... Until next poem, etc, bye.^__^