Some good action sequences and dialogue. Interesting juxtaposition of a modern FBI agent with the setting of Norse mythology.

You are a great writer admiral, and it shows in this story. Magnificent, this is definately one of my favorites.

PS: Is the Winston Churchill a few reviews below think he is the real Sir Winston Churchill? Just curious, because Churchill is dead... He died in 1965 at that. Hm...

And to think I only put you on my favorites for your essays. This is one of the greatest stories I've ever read. Max is hilarious. A classic FBI agent. Cool ending to the fifth chapter, with the lightning storm stopping the avalanche. I'll definatly be looking forward to more.

cool! i just read 'Exodus' and skipped to the bottom of chapter 2 to see where this was going to lead, and might i add that i certainly want to read the entire thing now! keep on writing.

Just curious; where did this 'evil' come from?

You're story seems rather short; do you intend to make it longer?

I've been writing for 30 years, and most of my works are quite long (you may recall my book "The Great Republic"), but I suppose one must start off short. Cheerio!

Well done. Keep it up.

I really think you're a wonderfully author. This tale you've created is simply fantastic. I hope you'll continue this story because it'd be a shame if you leave it like this. Thank you for posting your story for all of us to read.

You finally decided to update and you realy have my attention dude.
This is worth the read.
Cant wait for the next installment.

Sweetness. I'll be looking forward to more of this.

He Who Walks On All Fours

Cool start. You did ask for nitpicks on Seattle, and I can tell ya, the area of the city in which the Federal Building resides has horrible traffic. Indeed, during commute times, you're pretty much guaranteed to have Seattle be the Apocalypse of driving (especially the I-5). On the other hand, I'm not a member of the FBI, so as far as I'm concerned, you've got a pretty good representation.:)

He Who Walks On All Fours

Nice. I was wondering when you were going to continue with this. I like the premise of channeling the epic heroes.

This story has been very interesting so far.

I will keep reading it because I love mythology, especially the nordic one.

This is an interesting story. It has a good flavor of mystery and action. But, I am confused: what is the point of the story? I'm not sure where you're taking this. This is a good beginning and I, as well as some others, would love to see this story continue.

Looks pretty good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I still enjoyed this. It definitely wasn't what I was expecting, but it's still good.