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Reviews For: Touched By Reality

hesfb
2004-08-01
ch 1,
abusethis is a good beginning... not many chapters though are there? i think you need to update well at least i need you to... like the email addy ;p
Kanemoshi
2004-05-09
ch 1,
abuse*sniffle* no...sorry...you've gotta write more! pweeze?
Baby Morrison
2004-03-28
ch 1,
abuseThis is great. And really sad. I don't see any mistakes. Please update soon.
Bishies_Rule
2003-10-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseo! ^^; i like what you have so far...but you could do with some enters on the keyboard...^^;; and you could use a vairety of words...and maybe more detail.anyway, as before, i like what you have so far...keep it comin! ^^; i'll be lookin for the newest update! >.>
Bex Drake
2003-06-29
ch 1,
abuseThat's a really good start. I can't wait to see where you will take it.
arti
2003-05-03
ch 1, anon.
abusecool, nice start
Aloh Dark
2003-03-18
ch 1,
abuseAWW!! I loved this!! I can't wait for more!!
bubabaloo
2003-03-12
ch 1,
abuseMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW! I really really really want to know what happens! That wasn't enough!
*Crowd chants* We want more! we want more!

~*S.J. Winter*~
Doug
2003-03-12
ch 1,
abuseOh, it sent a shiver down my spine. I loved it! Come out with some more chapters soon.
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