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| hesfb 2004-08-01 ch 1, | abusethis is a good beginning... not many chapters though are there? i think you need to update well at least i need you to... like the email addy ;p |
| Kanemoshi 2004-05-09 ch 1, | abuse*sniffle* no...sorry...you've gotta write more! pweeze? |
| Baby Morrison 2004-03-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is great. And really sad. I don't see any mistakes. Please update soon. |
| Bishies_Rule 2003-10-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseo! ^^; i like what you have so far...but you could do with some enters on the keyboard...^^;; and you could use a vairety of words...and maybe more detail.anyway, as before, i like what you have so far...keep it comin! ^^; i'll be lookin for the newest update! >.> |
| Bex Drake 2003-06-29 ch 1, | abuseThat's a really good start. I can't wait to see where you will take it. |
| arti 2003-05-03 ch 1, anon. | abusecool, nice start |
| Aloh Dark 2003-03-18 ch 1, | abuseAWW!! I loved this!! I can't wait for more!! |
| bubabaloo 2003-03-12 ch 1, | abuseMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW! I really really really want to know what happens! That wasn't enough! *Crowd chants* We want more! we want more! ~*S.J. Winter*~ |
| Doug 2003-03-12 ch 1, | abuseOh, it sent a shiver down my spine. I loved it! Come out with some more chapters soon. |