Still reading, still interested, the penthouse thing is a little confusing though

This is certainly different, you've got my attention

This was an awesome story!
I would love to know more about Milly and Sharin too. They're definitely an interesting couple

Alison and jenna are soo cute :)

What a wonderfull story full of great detale that you will have fun reading.

Is this a femslash? (oh please let it be a femslash)

Nice.

Great Story! I really enjoyed reading it!

really loved this story, i hope you add more or write another one.

This is another one of my favorites of yours, mostly becuse I find it so amusing. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

Final review:

Thank you for writing such an *enjoyable* story. I really had fun reading it. I loved the characters, the plot, even the pace in your story.

And, as I love questions, I've got one final one to ask you (well, two, now that I think about it):

1. Why is Allison only a Captain? As one of the most important people in the winning of the war, surely she should be...I don't know...major by now? Or do they not do it that way?

2. Will there be a sequel? Please? Please?

Gods, I AM enjoying this. I'm not going to bother asking you how you came up with this, as a) you already answered part of that and b) you probably couldn't answer if I did.

You know, I bet one reason that people haven't reviewed is that they can't wait to get on to the next chapter. I...am thinking hard to find a suitable comment other than enjoyable. Why don't we just say adore (though that's no quite right-something like enjoy would be better) and leave it at that?

I'm quite...yes, I'm going to say it again...enjoying this. I do hope that there will be a sequel.

I'll keep the recommendation in mind. I'm content in this story. (Sorry, but I didn't want to repeat myself and say that I enjoy it).